Need a good common application essay about swimming could help to knock the door of any Ivy college.

For a girl love swimming, start training since 7 year old, 2-3 hr /day during school day, 4-6 hours during summer ( morning and after noon). Swimming varsity team (grade 9, 10, 11, 12). Swimming team captain (grade 12) . But her best time only ranked 11th in a state meeting.

Others info: Easy sick before start swimming practice, often go to hospital during age 1-6. Now become more healthy, more energetic, optimistic, friendly .and independently. She has SAT(2300+), ACT(36), a lot of EC, some leaderships.